Hi, every I am new here, please check my booth and give me some tips to improve, thanks a lot
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marce_shop Reputation: 10 See marce_shop's booth |
Your booth looks very nice, but I do have some suggestions for you. First, your profile says you have been selling online for ten years. Do you have feedback you can import from another site? Second, the grammar in your profile needs a lot of work. Do you know someone who can edit it for you? And third, you state that all the items in your booth are handcrafted in a pet and smoke free environment. That comment doesn’t seem to apply to the items in your booth. Either take that statement out, or revise it to indicate that it applies to your quilts, should you choose to list them on Bonanza. Hope this helps!
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ToysAndTreasures Reputation: 916 See ToysAndTreasures' booth |
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